Ice Pink Golf

what do you think about my poem?
I AM
I am always busy and involved in something
I wonder if there will be another world war
I hear myself thinking
I see the cocoa cola bear
I want an iPhone
I am always busy and involved in something
I pretend that there are no stop signs
I feel a cold Snapple iced tea
I touch a pink golf ball
I worry about what will happen after high school
I cry when I think about animal cruelty
I am always busy and involved in something
I understand why the dollar store is so cheap
I say things that come to mind
I dream about a bowl of almonds
I try to do my best
I hope that I can achieve my goals
I am always busy and involved in things
thanks you guys for your comments i tried to keep to the theme here which was describing myself and this is what came to mind i just wrote out of my short term memory
That’s the worst poem I’ve ever seen in my life. Please don’t write anymore, please.
Pink Heart- Korea Festival Siam Paragon Bangkok Thailand Oct 12,2008
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